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Every step I take
Brings me closer to her
Every step closer
Stirs the chaos in my heart
Our eyes meet, she smiles
And says hello
I open my mouth to tell her
That I love her
A voice interrupts
Arms wrap around her shoulders
I can only do nothing but stare
As my heart shatters like glass
I steady myself and swallow my sorrow
And force a weak smile from my lips
As she leaves with him by her side
Holding her hand tenderly
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Goodbye unrequited feelings, until we meet again :]
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:iconronsterronster:
thanks for the 100 views!! :D
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~xinsomniakydx Jun 5, 2010  Student General Artist
Hello dear :wave:

Your beautiful poem is found here [link] :aww:
I thank you for sharing it with us, it's been a great pleasure to read it :heart:

Hope you don't mind...
~ Mia. :forgiveme:
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:iconronsterronster:
I don't mind, thanks so much for the :+fav: and feature!! :D
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:iconronsterronster:
Wow, that's a quite alot of view in just a couple of hours, lol :P
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:iconronsterronster:
woah, that was fast... :D

anyway, thanks for reading.
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:iconronsterronster:
I never thought it would get this much attention. But yeah, it's my way of saying goodbye to one sided love. :)
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:iconbrittany4:
Well, I'm completely w/ u
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:iconronsterronster:
haha...thanks... :)
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